Thursday, October 1, 2015

6 Short Stories

The gun roars; his son alone.

My forever love, loved someone else.

The baby wails; it's now silent.

I found $20; stomach still empty.

"Money makes happiness"; rich man cries.

You're just ew. News cameras everywhere.
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8 comments:

  1. GisselleOctober 1, 2015 at 7:23 PM

    Hi Zonaly. I love your choice of words, and I like your creativity because your stories flow together and the little preview is so big that everybody can view them in different perspectives.

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  2. GisselleOctober 1, 2015 at 7:24 PM

    Hi Zonaly. I love your choice of words, and I like your creativity because your stories flow together and the little preview is so big that everybody can view them in different perspectives.

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  3. Mr. Ian McCarthyOctober 1, 2015 at 7:27 PM

    The third one could be dark. Scary.

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  4. Krystal SantiagoOctober 1, 2015 at 7:38 PM

    I love the fact that you mentioned how someone can be wealthy but yet still feel alone or unhappy. Great choice of words,it makes the sentence easy to comprehend so that everyone is able to interpret different ideas or perspectives.

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  5. Gift PendletonOctober 2, 2015 at 5:36 AM

    I like that your stories cover multiple aspects. I cant wait to read what you next.

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  6. Kristy LiuOctober 2, 2015 at 11:59 AM

    I really like how all your stories can be interpreted in different ways. It really makes the reader think about each scenario the way you choose specific words in the phrase.

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  7. UnknownOctober 2, 2015 at 12:14 PM

    I like the paradox of the rich man crying with money even though money is the so called source of happiness.

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  8. UnknownOctober 2, 2015 at 12:20 PM

    I like the fifth one because money doesn't always mean happiness. The richest people are sometimes the saddest.

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